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PostSubject: Twilight House   Tue Nov 09, 2010 7:04 pm

This is a just a poem at the moment I guess, it has a rhyme scheme even though it doesn't follow a constant meter. It appears to tell a story at first, but I don't know if other people will find it confusing near the end. Too bad I didn't post this on Halloween, it is kinda scary, so might fit the theme. It's called Twilight House, and I wrote it. I plan to submit it to the school's lit mag.


Chasing a spider
Crawling under a tree
Keep running after
Tryin to set my friend free
But then I can see
This place that it goes
Is below the cursed house
Filled with all the souls
That we thought were sent down
They still haunt the grounds
I just discovered something new
The house that we knew has a basement too

When there’s no escape
You must have reached your fate
Overcome by your fear
There’s no way out of here
Seems every second you die
In this maze of your lies
You fall to the ground
You’re spinning around
There is just no way out
Of the Twilight House
The twilight house, the twilight house

Trying to get away
Dodging all that I see
Get out of this place
A voice says eerily
Then he attacked me
Said he was the one
Who had first built this house
But twas overrun
When you souls were aroused
By the dead king himself
I proved that I was still alive
So he shone the light where my friend doth lie.

Since there’s no escape
You have just reached your fate
Overcome by your fear
There’s no way out of here
Like every second you die
In this maze of your eyes
You know you’re hell-bound
Scream, but there’s no sound
There’s just no way out
Of the Twilight House
The twilight house, the twilight house

Now I’m brushing the webs aside
Just one shake
Now he’s awake
Lightning swift we then say goodbye
Now we’ve got our revenge
But there’s much more challenge.

While trying to figure this out
Figuring what I’m about
There’s footsteps off in the distance
Creep closer to go listen
What I see is a shock
They float gracefully down
From a hole in the top
What is lost was now found
But they’re snatched away
Into this dead face
The one that his people looked on with disgrace
He rules over them right now
Under the Twilight House
The nonexistent
Overridden
Evil bitten
Realm of good, bad
Of Happy and Sad
Coming for me
Nowhere to flee
And I feel nothing but mad

There is no escape
You have met with your fate
Taken back by your fear
‘s there a way out of here
Like every second you die
In this maze of your eyes
You fade from this realm
After all was found
There’s just no way out
Of the Twilight House
The twilight house, the twilight house

(Whisper) As they close in, thorns wrap around as a new being takes me somewhere incomprehensible


I haven't posted this anywhere else yet.....except my blog
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PostSubject: Re: Twilight House   Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:42 am

Great poem man. And you were right... It was creepy...
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PostSubject: Re: Twilight House   Tue Nov 23, 2010 6:38 pm

Thanks. This is a late reply. This sentence I am typing right now makes it look like I'm saying more than I really am, unless you're actually reading these words, then you realize I'm just typring a bunch of random stuff to make it look like I've given this reply thought, when really I just wanted to say "Thanks", and this sentence is as good as spam (and wanted to bump it up to the recent posts sidebar).
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PostSubject: Re: Twilight House   Fri Feb 21, 2014 10:34 am

This was painful to reread. Actually I like it. ...No this sucks. Well it was ok. I already thought of like 7 better ways to word the lines reading through it. NO this is the worst thing to ever happen to humanity and I should be ashamed
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